Sunday, January 11, 2009

4 am in my brain


Someone left the door open (it might have been the wine).


Regret, Fear and Anxiety (Fear's cousin) stepped through, arm in arm.

Sleep doesn't like crowds. She left.


4 comments:

Dee said...

Laurie, sorry to hear about the no sleep because of anxiety. That happens to me quite a lot.

I also wanted you to know that the way you wrote it down in three sentences - the style you used - was very effective. It got your point across really well in short, concise sentences and the way that you constructed the sentences was clever - can't quite find the right word for it, but it worked, that's for sure.

Here's hoping you sleep tonight!

laurie said...

Thanks Dee! Here I am at 2am...maybe I need to cut down on the caffeine? Or maybe I'm just working something through.

Anonymous said...

4 am it is for me too. I love your writing style and can empathize with the feelings of anxiety .

angela said...

ah, so that's where they went when they left my house?

i agree with dee.

:)