Sunday, January 11, 2009

4 am in my brain


Someone left the door open (it might have been the wine).

Regret, Fear and Anxiety (Fear's cousin) stepped through, arm in arm.

Sleep doesn't like crowds. She left.
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4 comments:

  1. Dee11:36 pm

    Laurie, sorry to hear about the no sleep because of anxiety. That happens to me quite a lot.

    I also wanted you to know that the way you wrote it down in three sentences - the style you used - was very effective. It got your point across really well in short, concise sentences and the way that you constructed the sentences was clever - can't quite find the right word for it, but it worked, that's for sure.

    Here's hoping you sleep tonight!

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  2. laurie2:11 am

    Thanks Dee! Here I am at 2am...maybe I need to cut down on the caffeine? Or maybe I'm just working something through.

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  3. Anonymous7:54 am

    4 am it is for me too. I love your writing style and can empathize with the feelings of anxiety .

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  4. angela3:28 pm

    ah, so that's where they went when they left my house?

    i agree with dee.

    :)

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